Dear Moderator,

This is my A2 media blog. I have created a trailer for my film idea 'The Grim Truth' and I have also made a magazine and poster. These can be found below and my research and planning starts in September, http://gabysa2mediablog.blogspot.co.uk/2012_09_01_archive.html and my evaluation can be found here, http://gabysa2mediablog.blogspot.co.uk/2013_03_01_archive.html

Thank you,
Gabrielle Murphy

Wednesday, 12 December 2012

Research & Planning: Rough Cut Trailer Feedback

This our rough cut trailer. We presented this to the rest of our class on Friday and received feedback.

Strengths:

'Good acting' This has shown that our chosen actor is a good choice and therefore we will continue to work with Harriet.

'Logo's are good' Beth created the logo's using photoshop are fit with the genre of our film and look professional.

'Editing Transitions were good' The editing process was done quickly however it worked well and fitted with the genre and we are going to use some of similar transitions especially in the asylum scenes.


Weaknesses:

'Storyline was unclear' This was something a lot of people said and we realized it looks unclear to the audience as they don't know the rest of storyline. We do need to film more scenes that include other character will develop and show the story a lot more clearly

'Change location/make more convincing' This is something that I agree with and want to improve however talking to our teacher she suggested cropping some of the shots. We could look for another location however this may be difficult.

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